Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/August 11, 2006
Latest comment: 17 years ago by Oldelpaso in topic Request for changes
Request for changes edit
As this is now protected, its too late for me to make these changes, but can whoever puts this on the Main Page make the following changes:
- FA Premier League is linked twice. Can Premier League be removed from the opening sentence? - Manchester City are currently a Premier League team, but are not defined as one - putting it in the opening sentence is excessive.
- Second sentence - Starting with The football club seems clunky when the term football club is used in the preceding sentence. Can it be changed to Founded in 1880, the club have won the League Championship twice... or somesuch? Thanks. Oldelpaso 19:28, 10 August 2006 (UTC)