Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Pneumothorax/archive1

My task list:

• Axl's comments:
  • All unanswered points
  • Balance BHD content
  • Replace chest drain image
• Anon's comments: Introduce the concept of "bilateral pneumothoraces" - requires a secondary source
  • Covered in "prevention"
• RexxS comments
  • Review introduction based on comments
  • Include diving-related content as suggested on the talkpage
• Snowmanradio's comments
  • Review the need for references in the intro (leaving this alone)
  • Find sources for a veterinary section, if suitable - awaiting response on this paper
  • A bit more context about flying (currently in the beginning of "Treatment")
  • Find a source for "pyopneumothorax" and "hydropneumothorax" (not found anything on pyopneumothorax, which seems to be more of a concern when discussing empyema)

JFW | T@lk 11:33, 8 January 2012 (UTC)