Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Operation Igloo White

Operation Igloo White edit

I thought I had removed this article from the A-Class review list (since it was not completed), but was mistaken. Am seeking constructive criricism. RM Gillespie 15:34, 4 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin edit

A few thoughts, in no particular order:

The objection made during the last A-Class review regarding the lack of technical data is still applicable, I think; the article says very little about how the actual sensor systems worked. If this information is still classified, then that fact should be explicitly mentioned in the article.
The lead needs to be quite a bit longer in order to serve as a basically stand-alone summary of the article.
The "Conclusion" section is rather weasel-worded (e.g. "Even today scholars are divided on the merits of the electronic barrier system..."); I would expect a more explicit discussion of various historians and how they regard the operation.

Kirill Lokshin 21:46, 4 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]