Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of the Tenaru

Battle of the Tenaru edit

Request assistance in reviewing this article for any problems that I might have missed in my own reviews and copyedits of the article. Cla68 10:11, 21 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin edit

Excellent article (as usual!); just a few minor quibbles:

All month-day dates need to be wikified.
Could we possibly get a stub for Harukichi Hyakutake?

This should be ready for FAC in fairly short order, I think. Kirill Lokshin 18:34, 21 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review. I'm working on resolving the two items that you pointed out. One question...one of the A-class assessment reviewers mentioned that the picture showing the faces of the dead Japanese soldiers might be strongly objectionable by some. I admit that it's a disturbing picture. Should I consider replacing it with a different picture? I have another picture in a book (I would have to scan it) that shows basically the same thing, but without clearly showing the faces of the dead soldiers. Cla68 23:37, 22 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Mmm, your choice. We had another discussion on the topic here, with the general conclusion that we should try to follow whatever the standards of the time were in terms of what would be depicted; I suppose it's a question of which image provides a better illustration for the topic. Kirill Lokshin 23:43, 22 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]