Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/T-26/archive1

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T-26

I want to re-nominate this article, now that it has been peer reviewed. The fist A-class review has been archived here. JonCatalan 02:44, 31 January 2007 (UTC)

• Support - I think the textual errors and citation problems from the first review have been fixed, the article reads well and covers the topic very comprehensively. Hossen27 05:52, 31 January 2007 (UTC)

• Support - I found it very interesting and it is very well referenced, largely well written and has many useful and interesting pictures and tables. I'm supporting, but I have a few small notes if you wnat them: 1) Although the major problems from the last review have been resolved and the article reads much better, it might still benefit from another copyedit just to make it flow a bit smoother, some of the sentances are a little choppy. I'll take a look myself if you want? 2) In the final paragraph for the Second World War section, it says that production of the T-50 was intended for 1945 and then talks about factories being moved in 1941: Are these dates correct? 3) I wasn't sure about the paragraphs in the intro, I'll move them a little, see if you think it works, if not then revert.--Jackyd101 20:30, 31 January 2007 (UTC)

Thank's for your kind compliments. You're correct, that date is wrong - it should have read 1941, and it has been changed. In regards to the introduction I think I'll leave it as you have changed it until somebody else gives their opinion. Concerning your offer of taking a look at the sentence structure of the article, I would much appreciate it! JonCatalan 00:45, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

I just gave the article a thorough copyedit and look over again, I changed quite a few grammatical constructs, but tried to keep the meaning of the sentences as accurate as possible. Please look over the changes and make sure they are OK. I added one tag where I felt it was necessary to cite a source, and I also noticed a couple of occasions where I wasn't sure if you were quoting direct from a source or not. If you do, remember to use quotation marks. Finally, the use of "Ibid." as a source marker in Wikipedia is not a good idea, as unlike a paper article, if a random editor sticks a source of his own between your Ibids the aricle will rapidly descend into chaos. Perhaps all sources should be written in the Harvard form without the Ibid. Hope I helped, sorry if I made any errors and again congratulations on a thorough and interesting article.--Jackyd101 06:03, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Thank you for you continued help. I exchanged all the ibid. to the name of the author. I'll have to cite the source for the 'citation needed' when I get home (to look up the page number). Regarding sourcing; none of it is directly taken from any given text. It is all own wording. JonCatalan 20:02, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

I tweaked one last sentance, but congratulations once more on a very nice article and some excellent, well written and researched work.--Jackyd101 04:36, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

• Support - All the problems from the last review have been resolved, and no new ones seem to have arisen. Carom 21:39, 31 January 2007 (UTC)

• Weak Support There are a few quibbles:

You mention in the lead 12,000 T-26s produce. This fact is mentioned twice more in the following section – a bit unnecessary.

Sentence problems:

The 45 mm gun would see some evolution, as the original 45 mm 19K anti-tank gun[14], developed at Plant No. 8, in 1935 by the 45 mm model 1934, which saw the semi-automatic mechanism replaced by an inertial operating mechanism.

Also:

The turret featured in increase to 20 mm at 45 degrees sloping.[37]

There’s some unecessary wording:

During the Republican offensive towards Torrejon three T-26s were captured, and a few days later another four were captured as well

There are some contracted words eg: It’s. Should read It is.

There are punctuation problems and prose issues that will have to be ironed out if you want to go for FA. Raymond Palmer 00:17, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

I corrected the only 'it's' I could find, and I did some changing to the three sentences you have picked out, especially the second sentence (and the two other times I mentioned 12,000 units had been produces have been erased). I'm glad that you have made a note of prose requirements for FA status. I've actually be crossing my fingers that somebody will be nice enough and help me fixing the prose and punctuation. JonCatalan 00:45, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

You seem to have used a different Infobox from other AFVs - is this intentional for some reason? Raymond Palmer 01:22, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

I used the standard WikiProject Military history/Weapons infobox.

This one is often used for various AFV's, as it's slightly more specialized than the Weapon infobox. Consistency is good, but it's not really a big deal, in my opinion.Carom 01:36, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

It's not more specialized, actually; all the parameters in {{AFV}} are present in the consolidated infobox. {{Infobox Weapon}} is actually intended to replace {{AFV}}, and WP:WEAPON has been (slowly) converting articles to use it; but we haven't been able to arrange for a mass replacement yet. Kirill Lokshin 02:10, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Right you are, Kirill, right you are. Carom 02:19, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

My fault for bringing it up. Although I do like the colour scheme of the old box Raymond Palmer 02:27, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

• Support Seems better than the last read, and very few errors. UberVash 02:11, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

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