Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Operation Igloo White/Archive 1

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Operation Igloo White edit

For your perusal. RM Gillespie 16:36, 5 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comment I would like to see a few more citations to cover a couple places that are pretty bare. Specifically, the first paragraph of "Pinball Wizards" and the first two paragraphs of "Conclusion." Other than that, it looks good. Carom 17:06, 5 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose In general well-written and well-cited, good flow. However:

Needs a proofread. There are missing quotation marks, many broken citations that appear as question marks in the references section.
Every book-scanned image is completely crooked. Look at the margins of the images compared to the margins of the surrounding boxes.
Lacks depth. I was expecting a much more technical article with descriptions of the sensors, this is a nice overview but it left me wanting for more info. - Emt147 ^Burninate! 08:21, 7 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Weak Oppose there are to many question marks in the reference section. When these question cites are replaed with cites that have meaningful information I will reconsider. TomStar81 (Talk) 19:59, 7 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose - I'm gonna have to go with oppose also for alot of the reasons that Emt147 listed, specifically the depth of the article and the images included in the article. It is a well organized and well written article, however it lacks detail and depth. The image issue is secondary, but better images would only enhance the article as a whole. Spot87 02:08, 8 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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