Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Cretan War (205–200 BC)/Archive 4

Cretan War edit

Previous nominations here, here, and here.

Renominating article for Kyriakos; no opinion on its quality. Kirill Lokshin 22:40, 27 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Objection: "But Pergamum's king, Attalus I, had strengthened the walls before he set off on the campaign against Macedon and the walls proved too strong for the Macedonian army" I can hardly believe that. Could you clarify how the Macedonians wanted to enter and what the inhabitants had done against it? Language could be more encyclopedic sometimes.Wandalstouring 14:53, 28 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I clarified it. Kyriakos 21:44, 28 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
And I also want to ask. Why did you change the footnote style. Kyriakos 22:03, 28 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
It had been requested on the project talk page. Wandalstouring 23:27, 29 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
minor oppose Looking at the previous nominations I seem to be the reacuring bane of this article. This though, is not my intention. Rather my contignuous return is my interest in this article and the respect that I give it to not want to see a lesser shade of itself gain prominence. Sadly, I must once again oppose its A-status. Akin to my previous comments, the delivery irk remains: on occassions synonyms would be most welcomed, as would some less conversationnal writting style. In this I add the strange blend of tone and style presented in the article. Godspeed--Dryzen 19:47, 30 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Although not written as well as it probably could be, I think the article flows adequately, cites most, if not all of it's assertions and statements of fact, and is reasonably understandable. I believe it's qualified to move from GA to A. Cla68 00:18, 31 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]