Wikipedia:Portal peer review/Islam/archive1

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Portal:Islam edit

I think this portal has reached Featured portal criteria, but I want to check it before nominating there.Seyyed(t-c) 15:35, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'm relatively new to portals but here's what stood out to me.
  • The lead paragraph has an awful lot of parenthesis, which I think breaks the flow.
  • Does the Selected Picture have to be in a thumb format? Personally, I think it's distracting in this case.
  • Same thing with the reference. If some one wants to check references, they can click the article link.
Everything else looks fine to me. Just make sure everything is updated regularly. I hope this helps some. (Guyinblack25 talk 22:16, 28 August 2008 (UTC))[reply]
I would recommend use of some other colors besides green and black. Maybe a turquoise green-white-black combination would be better. Also there is a gap in the page (at least in my browser), below Selected location which needs to be filled. Readjust it or add another section. Finally, why does selected picture not have a picture in it?--Shahab (talk) 04:11, 31 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Good points raised by Shahab. You also need a link to show previous selections of the portal. I also noticed that this portal did not undergo any major updates for a few months. OhanaUnitedTalk page 18:20, 31 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Reformatting in progress

Doing some reformatting and work on this portal. Should be done soon, will update when done. Cirt (talk) 17:40, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Most of the reformatting is done, now just to fill in the reformatted subsections with more selections of randomized content (will stick to WP:FA and WP:GA only). Should be done with that soon. Cirt (talk) 17:57, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Missing

Just noticed this portal is missing a Related portals section. I will get on that. Cirt (talk) 17:44, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, did that. Cirt (talk) 17:57, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Done

Okay I'm pretty much done with the reformatting work, and ready to proceed to WP:FPOC - thoughts? Cirt (talk) 18:40, 17 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

In this month

On second thought, might want to work on incorporating an In this month section, modeled after Portal:Norway/Selected anniversaries - could glean information from helpful pages such as Timeline of Muslim history. I will get to work on that. Cirt (talk) 18:49, 17 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, now this is also completed, with four entries per month (rotates based on current month automatically at the main portal page). Cirt (talk) 13:02, 18 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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