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I am trying to figure out what else could be done to make this become a Good Article. I don't know if this article has what it takes to become a Featured Article just yet but if you want to review it like one, go ahead. I think this might get there with some help. GamerPro64 03:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Z1720 edit

Hi, I've taken a quick scan through the article and here are some comments:

"intended to have a black-centric film" Is this supposed to say, "intended to be a black-centric film"?
- Changed. GamerPro64 20:09, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"negative reviews from critics. Despite negative reception," Can you rephrase to remove negative? Suggestion: "The film was a commercial success but received negative reviews from critics while the heavy metal soundtrack received praise."
- Changed. GamerPro64 20:09, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Zombie Nightmare shown in" Change to "Zombie Nightmare was shown in"
- Added word in. GamerPro64 20:09, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Reception section has a lot of "X said this" or "In Y, X said this" formatting. Are there common themes from the critics that you can combine together?
- There are. Will be working on the section later when I can see if I have exhausted all the sources. GamerPro64 20:09, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The "Mystery Science Theater 3000" talks a lot about the movie's release and its reception on the show. I wonder if it should be a Level 3 heading inside Release instead?
- Did so. GamerPro64 20:09, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I hope this helps. Please ping me if you have any questions or concerns. Z1720 (talk) 15:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I found some additional sources from Variety you could use in the article:

Film review: Zombia Nightmare Variety (Archive: 1905-2000); Los Angeles Vol. 329, Iss. 4, (Nov 18, 1987): 14. - Found on ProQuest. [1]
Variety (Archive: 1905-2000); Los Angeles Vol. 329, Iss. 13, (Jan 20, 1988): 28, 69, 72-73, 90. - Found on ProQuest. This verifies its MPAA rating and US release date. [2]

Let me know if you want me to email PDF copies of the articles. Z1720 (talk) 15:41, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720:Yes I would like these copies. GamerPro64 20:09, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Send me an email and I will reply back with pdf files. Z1720 (talk) 20:38, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]