Wikipedia:Peer review/World of Warcraft/archive1
World of Warcraft edit
This article is currently at GA-status. I would like to know what it would take for this to be the first Featured Article about an MMORPG. -- R'son-W (speak to me/breathe) 00:22, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
Spebi
Congratulations on a great article :)
- I see a few external links within the article context, such as "[...] any player on any realm can view their current arena team's rankings called "The Armory"", under PvP rankings; this needs to be properly cited using
<ref>tags. - Replace "More information on this topic is available in this forum post, made by a Blizzard MVP (Most Valuable Poster)." with
<ref>More information on modification can be found on this World of Warcraft forum [http://forums.worldofwarcraft.com/thread.html?topicId=48647169&sid=1 post], made by [user name of poster].",</ref>or similar, or just add the link to External links. - Replace "Although widely popular (with 8 million players)," (under Controversy and criticism) with "Although widely popular (with 8 million players),
<ref>[citation here]</ref>". - Try and find a reliable source to replace that {{fact}} tag (under Roleplaying). I doubt an article would ever become an FA with lousy {{fact}} tags all over the place (luckily there is only one in this article).
I can't really comment on any of the prose or Manual of Style issues right now, don't have the time. Again, it is a great article and everyone working on it has obviously put a lot of effort and time into it. Good luck with it! :) Kind regards, Sebi [talk] 04:45, 15 July 2007 (UTC)