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I've listed this article for peer review because…it has recently passed GA and I'd like to nominate it for FA.GrapedApe (talk) 16:13, 16 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for asking. I've been pretty active for years on Internet forums discussing college selection and college admission, so I'm glad to take a look. The article already has a lot of facts and great sourcing of most factual statements. My friendly suggestion would be to move more of the citations of demographic facts such as SAT score ranges and student ethnicity from U.S. News (a Common Data Set data source perceived to be somewhat commercial in orientation) to College Board (a nonprofit) or to the federal government IPEDS database. For most of those purposes, the College Board database is more user-friendly. Good work on the whole. I don't know what distinguishes a good article on a college from a featured article on a college, but I wish you well in finding out. -- WeijiBaikeBianji (talk) 02:19, 23 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. Good suggestion, too. I'll see if I can find a better source for that data.--GrapedApe (talk) 21:22, 25 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Copyeditor Comments The prose is looking good so far, but can you use the {{convert}} template in the future for measurements? It is a standardized format from what I've seen. WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 02:43, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Also, can you apply the citations in the table in Student body to the specific numbers, or do they all have the same table? WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 18:32, 25 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]