United States cable news edit
- A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for January 2009.
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I've listed this article for peer review because I believe this article has a good start, but needs some work.
Thanks, Son (talk) 01:57, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
Comments by using Eddie6705 edit
- Firstly i would start by adding the following template for each citation, rather than simply the web address; {{cite news |first= |last= |authorlink= |coauthors= |title= |url= |work= |publisher= |date= |accessdate=28 January 2009 }} (Delete the parameters you don't need).
- I would try and expand the lead to make it at least two paragraphs long. Summarise the article more in this section.
- The first half of the article needs more referencing, there is only one before the ratings section.
Per the peer review directions, I am archiving this as it has a cleanup tag at the top of the article. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:11, 29 January 2009 (UTC)