Wikipedia:Peer review/Transfusion dependent anemia/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because I have made this article for a university assessment and one of the requirements of the assessment is to publish an article to mainspace.

Thanks, Munchkaa (talk) 11:53, 1 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Munchkaa I would like you to know that, although (I assume) you are paying your university fees, it's clear the teaching component has been outsourced to Wikipedia volunteers who are expected to do it for free. This entire article should be deleted and merged into Anaemia. Transfusion dependent anaemia describes anaemia that is transfusion dependent. It's not an actual pathological subtype. It's confusing and will waste the time of future editors to have this as a duplicate article. I would work on your other assignments who I hope are not being also outsourced to eg. Reddit or Yahoo Answers for marking. Yours, --Tom (LT) (talk) 00:31, 3 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]