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Thirteen (Megadeth album) edit

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I am considering nominating this article to be a featured article. However, I would like to receive feedback as to the quality of the article as of now, and what kind of improvements will be necessary to bring it up to FA-quality. Thanks, L1A1 FAL (talk) 02:03, 29 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Vic Rattlehead

I'm not sure whether it is an official criteria, but adding some sub-section titles might be useful for better navigation. It will help the common reader find a certain information without going through the whole text. Another idea would be to cut off the reviews that are not mentioned in the prose (Artistdirect and The Boston Phoenix for example) and to put the grades from Metal Forces and This Is Fake DIY on their place.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 12:24, 29 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]