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The Puppy Episode edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because although it's brand-new I think it comes fairly close to GA standards. I'd like another set of eyes on it before making the nomination.

Thanks, Otto4711 (talk) 07:36, 19 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Not going to do a full review here since this isn't my field of expertise, but you might want to rephrase "ABC situation comedy Ellen" so we don't have three separate blue linked terms in a row. We don't want seas of blue. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshellsOtter chirpsHELP) 19:46, 19 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments I don't have very much to say about the article, there were a few errors, but these were so minor that I've already fixed them myself. A few things left though:

  • Reference 17 (TV guide) needs to link to the TV Guide article in question, not to the TV Guide Ellen news page because that still changes every once in a while.
  • The tv show infobox has a parameter for guest stars, so you can merge the guest star section into the infobox.
  • According to this, reference 4 is dead.

Otherwise the page looks nice, problably GA worthy (maybe even FA?). Good luck with the eventual GAc.--Music26/11 13:10, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]