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Hi everyone! I ask to peer review this because it ended up to be my first in-depth article. (I planned another topic for this role, but attempts to delete this article prompted me to save it by going deep.) I like to go deep into topics, so your kind feedback should be helpful for me to go forward.

Thanks, 凰兰时罗 (talk) 21:12, 3 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Impressive work in expanding the article after it was almost deleted. There are some issues I noted if you want to make the article become a GA or FA.

First of all, the lead. Per WP: Lead, it should be at least 2 paragraphs long and no use citations since it will be covered in the body.
Avoid unsourced statements like "The newspaper maintains dedicated sections to local news from Darrington, Clear Lake, Hamilton, Lyman, Marblemount, Newhalem, Rockport, and Sedro-Woolley."
The image in distribution really clashes with the prose. I would recommend merging the two distrubution sections and leave the image below them.

That's all I found. Great work. If you fix some of this issues I believe it could become a good article which is a lot for its almost deletion. Also if you have free time, I also made a peer review here. Could you give it a look? Thanks.Tintor2 (talk) 15:27, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]