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So It's Come to This: A Simpsons Clip Show

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I got stuck. Asides from the style, what is this article missing (content), and where should I get the refs from? I don't have the dvd, so is it possible to get this article to GA from "outside" sources? Thanks, Nergaal (talk) 21:58, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

• The lead is too short, try to model it after "A Streetcar Named Marge" or any other Simpsons GA articles.
• Me or someone else at WP:DOH can probably help out with the production section.
• The reception section is probably long enough (see "Kamp Krusty").
• Removed the unsourced stuff from the Cultural references section.
• External links should be SNPP, TheSimpsons.com, IMDb and TV.com.

--TheLeftorium 19:39, 15 October 2008 (UTC)

I can try to help out with the Reception section. Cirt (talk) 20:06, 15 October 2008 (UTC)

Thanks guys for all the help! It is much better now than the level I hoped I would get it to. Nergaal (talk) 18:07, 18 October 2008 (UTC)