Wikipedia:Peer review/Rode Hall/archive1

Rode Hall edit

This peer review discussion has been closed.
. I've listed this article for peer review with a view to nominating it for GA status. I would particularly like criticism on the language and the extensiveness of the coverage.

Thanks, Sotakeit (talk) 10:28, 28 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lede
  • What is Grade II?
  • c. → circa
History
  • Is there any information about Roger Wilbraham? Who was he specifically?
Architecture
  • c. → circa.
  • now → currently.
  • This section definitely needs more sources, one per paragraph is not enough for interior.

I hope this helps! MJ94 (talk) 23:59, 28 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

All, except "c./circa", updated as per your points. "C." is the suggested usage as per the MOS (WP:MOS#Circa). I also could find very little extra information on Roger Wilbraham, but have tried to give a little more information on other important figures in the house's history, such as RAndle Wilbraham III. Thanks for the suggestions! Sotakeit (talk) 12:25, 29 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]