Wikipedia:Peer review/Robert Garran/archive1

Robert Garran edit

Most of the prose here was written by myself, so I'm looking for some fresh eyes and some comments about the quality of the writing, as well as comments about the overall standard of the article, since I'm ultimately looking towards FAC for this one. --bainer (talk) 04:00, 12 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

And thank you SandyGeorgia, who's already made a few improvements! --bainer (talk) 04:40, 12 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 22:18, 13 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- Added the Persondata template per automatic suggestion. --bainer (talk) 01:02, 14 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]