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Polish-Muscovy War (1605-1618) edit

A forgotten Eastern European war. One in which Moscow was captured and the fate of the entire region was decided. Comments much welcomed, I would like to submit it to FAC soon. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 10:14, 31 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  • It looks very good to me, although the mass of names and places can get a little overwhelming the first time through. It could use a "before" map near the top to show the situation at the start. There are a few minor syntax errors and some spelling errors (e.g. cronwed , officialy, tolernace). So the page could also do with running through a spelling checker. In "Lead up to the war" there is a missing closed parenthesis in the last paragraph. — RJH 15:12, 9 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could benefit from some English language copyediting. --Lysy (talk) 12:33, 6 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
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