Wikipedia:Peer review/Peter Parker (The Amazing Spider-Man film series)/archive1

Peter Parker (The Amazing Spider-Man film series)

First time doing a peer review! I've listed this article for peer review because I think it is already very close to GA-status, and just want to try and catch out any major issues before nominating it. What with the recent release of Spider-Man: No Way Home and the demand for The Amazing Spider-Man 3 to be made, I think this article is more than ready to receive the treatment it deserves. Thanks! ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 21:06, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Pamzeis

Having recently watched this film series (well, kind of, I just mostly skipped through them because they were sorta slow. And this had nothing to do with No Way Home (I'm being honest)), I'll try to have a look. Please don't take any offence if I, uh, quit. I've been doing that a bit recently because, um, stress. Pamzeis (talk) 13:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

To be clear, he's not my favourite TASM character, and I don't know if he's my favourite Spider-Man, because I haven't seen Spider-Man films outside TASM films. OK, let's not screw this up.

• the Marvel Comics superhero of the same name created by Stan Lee and Steve Ditko — I got confused for a minute and thought this article's character was created by Lee and Ditko, not the comics' character...
• them in the film itself, referred to — is kinda clunky and a bit confusing
• Days after Raimi's departure — which is... when?
• Tolmach, now president — as in now 2022 or now a decade ago when the film was being developed?
• give sharp focus to Parker's — what is a "sharp focus", tho?
• British-American actor Andrew Garfield was cast as Peter Parker/Spider-Man for the 2012 film and its sequel, with his casting being officially made on July 1, 2010. — wh- wh- what? OK, am I correct assuming that Garfield's 2010 contract or something like that stated he would also appear in a sequel? And the big after the comma is kinda clunky...
• Garfield also performed some of his own stunts in the film — anything that can be elaborated about what stunts he performed in the film?
• After leaked information from the hack also indicated Sony to be in talks to have Sam Raimi direct Spider-Man vs. The Amazing Spider-Man, a multiversal crossover film featuring Garfield's Spider-Man encounter Tobey Maguire's Spider-Man, as well as a new trilogy starring Maguire; and to also be in talks with Marvel Studios about integrating a rebooted version of Spider-Man into the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU), beginning with Captain America: Civil War (2016), a deal was reached in early 2015 between the two studios to make the latter official, effectively cancelling The Amazing Spider-Man franchise. — das a lot to take in... split sentence?
• Tom Holland described the inclusion of his Spider-Man precedecessors Garfield and Tobey Maguire in Spider-Man: No Way Home 'was an idea that seemed impossible' before it came to fruition — this reads more like something that would be in the No Way Home article. You don't have to take my suggestion, but personally, I would word it like this: According to Holland, the inclusion of Garfield and Maguire "seemed impossible" before it came to fruition. (Fine, it does read very similar...)
• Holland has also stated he regretted not contacting Garfield after he intially succeeded him in the role and felt lucky that Spider-Man: No Way Home had given both actors a second chance to discuss the Spider-Man character. — ...Is this trivia?

Okie, guess I started this off. Yep, there was a 2-week+ delay... Pamzeis (talk) 07:41, 23 February 2022 (UTC)