Wikipedia:Peer review/Norwegian Campaign/archive1

Norwegian Campaign edit

Hello.

I have been working on the Norwegian Campaign, the first real military confrontation between Nazi Germany and the Western Allies, and one of the most overlooked campaigns in the war. I would really appreciate feedback to help me polish it up to what I believe could be a FAC. Oberiko 19:53, 1 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

It's a very good article, but I have a major issue with the fact that there is a considerable redundancy with the Operation Weserübung page. I'd like to see a lot of material from the later page merged onto Norwegian Campaign page, and just having the operation page focus on the politics and planning, rather than the actual campaign. The other issue I have is with the "Important People" section. If they are important then they should be worked into the text, rather than being a brief list at the end of the page. Thanks! :) — RJH 15:58, 2 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]