Wikipedia:Peer review/Neuroscience/archive1

Neuroscience edit

I've listed this article for peer review because… submission for GA , main issues are grammar errors and potentially unsourced material. besides this, I would like to see the article improved in general. I think a vital article should be as high quality as possible.

Thanks, RJJ4y7 (talk) 13:00, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Wretchskull edit

  • Multiple sentences and paragraphs are unreferenced.
  • References and information about modern neuroscience can almost certainly be updated. Searching "Neuroscience" on google scholar shows 64,000 results in 2021 alone.
  • Some subsections contain a few or just one sentence, such as "Artificial neuron implants".
  • The table in the "Major branches" section only has three references for three branches.

Feel free to use the WP:LIB and WP:RX. Good luck! - Wretchskull (talk) 16:47, 4 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@RJJ4y7: to ensure that they saw the above comments. Z1720 (talk) 02:27, 22 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I am closing this PR due to inactivity. A new PR can be opened once the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 16:25, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]