Wikipedia:Peer review/NPA Personality Theory/archive1

NPA personality theory edit

This article is being submitted for peer review on the suggestion of one of the editors, who thought it might be eventually suitable for submission as a featured article -- especially as very few articles in Psychology are so submitted. Any advice as to general further improvements would be appreciated. Many thanks. ABenis 15:29, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

In-line citations are needed. --Osbus 21:35, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Will work on it. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

First off, the article should be moved to NPA personality theory.

Will do. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please incorporate "Historical note" into the rest of the article somewhere.

Done. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.
This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.

Thanks. Will work in it. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Images need proper image copyright tags and source information. Specifically, Image:Karen Horney.jpg need(s) proper image copyright tags.

The image was imported from Wikipédia/France to Commons with the same file name and copyright tag. Will see what the problem is. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
Thanks, AndyZ _t 23:41, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]