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I've listed this article for peer review because I think the article is a strong contender for GA. Any suggestions for further improvements will be welcome. Thanks, --Jionpedia ✉ 13:52, 10 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have only two suggestions so far: the lead could be expanded (the third para is too shot), and the plot appears a little more than 700 words (the last para about Mike and Sulley's expulsion can be copy edited). The plot also lacks many links. If I find anymore suggestions, I'll tell u. ---- Kailash29792 (talk) 01:57, 30 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]