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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to promote it to GA. I am facing some difficulties in expanding the article primarily because lack of sufficient information for GA standards. This is because, Mr. Ansari was a diplomat and there is hardly any coverage of him. Also though he became the vice president of India, since it is merely a ceremonial post, not much is to add about. So I need some suggestions to improve this article.

Thanks, RRD (talk) 12:46, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by CookieMonster755 edit

I will be making some comments soon. However, on a first note, the lead needs improvement. There are only two paragraphs in the lead. Generally, it should be four and should be a summary of the article. I will mention more specifics when I have time. On another note, consistency in capitalization and grammar should be established. Indian Politician, the word politician should be lower cased, as well as vice in Vice president. Thanks. CookieMonster755 ✉ 20:29, 1 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]