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I've listed this article for peer review because of the massive amount of revisions I've done to it within the last month. This article was in serious need of editing, and I now believe that it could be qualified as a "good article". Also, I don't have all the time in the world to pick through it endlessly, so if you see any problems that could prevent it from being classified as a good article, please let me know and I'll fix them right away.

Thanks, Nowhereman86 (talk) 17:36, 23 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Many references need citation templates such as {{cite web}} with author, publisher, publication date and all other parameters that can be filled filled, such as http://www.lib.lsu.edu/collserv/colldev/policies/governmentdocuments.html and http://www.lsu.edu/highlights/033/lbtc.html--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:41, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The last paragraph in the "19th Century" section isn't referenced--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:41, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
You have many other paragraphs not referenced, please reference any fact to comply with Wikipedia:Verifiability, Wikipedia:Citing sources and Wikipedia:Citation templates.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:41, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The Lead should be three paragraphs since the article is long enough...--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:41, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]