Wikipedia:Peer review/List of spells in Harry Potter/archive1

List of spells in Harry Potter

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I believe that this article has good content, length, etc. It just needs a few more tweaks. If the rest of Wikipedia feels the same way, then it's on its way to a featured list nomination. --- cymru lass ^{(hit me up)}⁄_{(background check)} 01:05, 12 August 2010 (UTC)

Commment Sandman888 (talk) ^{Latest FLC} 11:12, 12 August 2010 (UTC)

• You have a fundamental problem with sources. Referring to a quiz in the BBC is unacceptable. Most of the BBC sources seem to be entertainment for kids. This will have a hard time at the FLC I'm afraid. Also use a proper template, e.g. {cite web} for internet ' references, don't leave bare URLs as " http://www.the-leaky-cauldron.org/docs/jkrtrialday1.txt."
• Go through each of the sources and see if you think they will pass scrutiny and meet WP:RS.
• To be honest, the whole list seems a) incomplete or b) original research.

Comment Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:51, 13 August 2010 (UTC)

• I think a customisation of the table of contents is needed; at the moment it is incredibly large.
  • I agree. How does one go about doing that? cymru lass ^{(hit me up)}⁄_{(background check)} 18:29, 14 August 2010 (UTC)