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I'm hoping to submit this list to FLC in the near future, so your comments would be appreciated. In particular I'd like feedback on the opening paragraphs of each section, most of which are not by me (though the longer ones are). Ham 21:39, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
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Comments from LT910001 edit
I apologise that you haven't had any comments in over a month. Having had a quick skim of the article, this article is very thorough, well-written, sourced, and would make an excellent travel companion ( :) ). I would encourage you to resolve any minor issues remaining within the context of an FL nomination. Kind regards, --LT910001 (talk) 13:26, 10 December 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you! :) Ham 16:01, 10 December 2013 (UTC)