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List of countries with Burger King franchises edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I need to make it a featured list and have never worked on one. I need help.

Thanks, Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 04:00, 30 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm having trouble with the table content and criteria you've set up. Seeing that there is a significant scarcity of information under the notes and, depending on the region, proprietary owners, perhaps you should reconstruct the categories. Maybe you also want to add which major cities house the franchise as well. --EbenezerScruz (talk) 17:59, 11 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The prose is very choppy, with lots of short sentences and paragraphs. I'm also concerned with the incompleteness of the tables. If they can't be filled in completely, perhaps they should be replaced or omitted. The referencing seems incomplete as well. Canada Hky (talk) 04:00, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm still filling them in, you can see where I've been and what still needs to be done. --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 14:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The lead needs to be expanded somewhat, but I suppose that will come. Just a note on maps, some of them are choppy and unappealing, Europe obviously not done. I'd redo them in an .svg format rather than a .png, and combine the current Caribbean and North American sections. You can make svg's using Inkscape, or if you can't figure out how but still think it'd be worth it, I could easily do it. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 15:37, 28 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]