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A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it to be a needed addition to Wikipedia's attempt to make a comprehensive guide to television programs. At current time I think it offers a considerable amount of information to make it worthy of a peer review. Further comments by me can be found in the article's discussion section.

Thanks, Jimknut (talk) 17:30, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement.

The article needs a copyedit - "there" is used for "their", "broadcasted" is used where "broadcast" is meant, spare brackets [, etc.
The language of the lead is either too POV or too in-universe, or perhaps both - dastardly villains etc.
I would put the DVD releases section last (chronological order), not first
The table on guest stars who were also on Star Trek seems very much original research - why should this be in this article?
A model article is useful for ideas and examples to follow - there are a large number od episode lists at Wikipedia:Featured_lists#Media
Should the Will Smith movie version be mentioned?

Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 04:58, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]