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I would like to get this to FL status but I'm a little worried it might be too short for that. Obviously I'd to know if there is anything eles I need to fix too.

Thanks, Buc (talk) 19:04, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

Yes it's a little short but it doesn't mean it wouldn't stand a chance at FLC. It is, after all, comprehensive.
Of the 7 Buccaneers - seven.
You could specify (and link to) the precise Superbowl in the lead.
Probably ought to cite the claim that three coaches were former players and the firing claim too.
" This trade came after Dungy was fired after the Buccaneers has lost in the playoffs to the Eagles for the second year in a row and because it was determined that the offence Dungy ran was too inconsistent and he was unable to win in the playoffs." - too long, doesn't make sense to me (...has lost in the playoffs...?)
- Removed, only put this in to bump up the word count in order to pass it for DYK. Buc (talk) 18:22, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"dispite" typo.
Colour should not be the only way of identifying a property - see WP:COLOR. Use an asterisk, dagger etc to also denote coaches spending their entire career with the Bucs.
Footnotes and References can be merged into a single References section with your current Footnotes being "Specific" and your current References being "General".
What make JT-SW.com a reliable source?
Hickok Sports. or Hickok Sports.com?
Be consistent with the use of either work or publisher in the references.

That's about it. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:50, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Pinkkeith (talk · contribs)

I would add a content for references under the foot notes content. The bulleted list at the end are not foot notes, but references for the article.
Remove foot note five (Spent entire professional head coaching career with Buccaneers ). There is no reason to point this out since the table is already coded for this information.