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List of Real Madrid C.F. managers edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because i think it's close to FL status, but needs some improvements.

Thanks, Hadrianos1990 ^talk 05:37, 24 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I think it has good chances to become FL. The expression "sack" seems too informal to me. Jan.Kamenicek (talk) 09:23, 24 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Brianboulton comments: In general the list itself seems to be in much the same format and contain much the same information as other lists of football managers, and is very clearly presented. A few specific points arise:-

As this is English Wikipedia, English equivalents should be given for a few terms (La Liga, Copa del Ray, Supercopa de Espaňa). This could best be done by way of a note.
You list only two references. They do not seem to provide all the information shown in the tables. For example, only a few recent performance statistics seem to be available on these sites, so where has the historic information come from?
Unlike other football management lists which have been featured, ther are virtually no in-line citations
All references need to be properly formatted, providing minimally title, publisher and access date.
Who is behind the Real Madrid portal site? How can we be confident that it is accurate?
In the text, the phrase "as well as those who have been in permanent charge" is unnecessary, since this is clearly the main object of the list.

Brianboulton (talk) 22:59, 2 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]