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Per a request at WP:RB, I'm trying to get a level 1 vital article to GA/FA status. I chose this one for now because it is B-Class and a former good article candidate. I would like some specific points to work on to get it to GA/FA status.

Thanks, interstate five 18:49, 13 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Interstatefive, I think the biggest thing the article needs improvement on is citations. Add citations to everything that don't have citations, except in the lead. That's the easiest thing to do to improve the article significantly. Expanding on short sections, and reduce information in long sections. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 08:52, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]