Layered clothing edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to hear if there are any problems with it that'd make unrealistic its nomination as a Good Article.
Thanks, Skarkkai (talk) 09:55, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- There are no in-line references using {{cite web}} for example. I imagine it would be quick-failed for this alone.
- Not keen on the links which just head to the same article, only two lines lower (e.g. Inner layer).
- Why is some of the text in bold (e.g. Synthetic materials)? Doesn't need to be.
- Explain what PETE before using the abbreviation.
- A lot of claims in this article read like WP:OR e.g. "Silk feels more comfortable, but is weaker and harder to take care of, and is less commonly used. " - either reference this or reword to stay purely factual.
- " (UK company Buffalo" avoid these kind of links.
- Second EL appears to be bordering on advertising, giving undue weight to one manufacturer.
The Rambling Man (talk) 11:01, 5 August 2008 (UTC)