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Bengaluru International Airport edit
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Article has undergone major changes over time. Any more inputs into improvement are welcome, the ultimate aim, of course, is to get to GA/FA. Thanks, Lynch7 16:58, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
PS: I'm not sure if this comes under the Geography category, but I took a shot. Do let me know if it is to be listed somewhere else. Thanks! Lynch7 16:58, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
Comments by Niagara
- The section on the runway neglets to mention basic information about it (namely length, runway heading, etc.)
- It may be worthwhile to merge the "Construction", "2009 proposed renaming", and "2010 airport expansion plans" sections into a general "History" section (with sub-sections as needed). Ideas for additional information to add to it include what was before the current airport (i.e. where did one fly into Bangalore before Bengaluru International).
- "Common Use Terminal Equipment (CUTE) enabled check-in counters: 54 and 20 self check in counters." — Sentence fragment, also explaining what CUTE-enabled is would be a good idea.
- "...an Indian flight to Singapore left Bangalore International Airport," — A little confusing as there is no mention of other names of the airport in the lead.
- The "Road" section does not mention access via NH-7.
- Measurements like 2,000 cars, 600 passengers should have a non-breaking space (
) between the number and the unit of measure. - "...the year 2011." — Is there need to always introduce a year by saying "the year"?
- What public domain material is from the AFHRA?
- Look at articles like Port Columbus International Airport and Chicago Midway International Airport to get an idea of what a GA airport article looks like.
If these comments were helpful, consider reviewing an article in the backlog, which is how I found yours. Niagara Don't give up the ship 00:38, 3 October 2011 (UTC)