Wikipedia:Peer review/Karrinyup Shopping Centre/archive1

Karrinyup Shopping Centre

Opening Peer Review to get additional feedback on the article in order to progress it to possible FA status. Thewinchester ^(talk) 07:44, 26 July 2007 (UTC) Issues:[reply]

History of centre from 1973 onwards needs to be completed, including addition of coverage of 1982 and 1987 extensions. Thewinchester ^(talk) 07:44, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Twenty Years

Although i have bugger all knowledge of shopping centres, ill give this a go, just for Le' Win.

in "1996 Redevelopment" there are 4 citations next to each other, i think it looks a tad ugly, and that they should be merged, per the referencing style used in Hamersley, Western Australia.
In facilities, just before the [cite needed] tag, there needs to be a fullstop.
Ownership section seems a tad confusing to me. I cant see how they came to their current arrangement (in relation to percentages of ownership) given the information contained in infobox and ownership section. Maybe its just me, not sure.

Thats about all i can see, otherwise its probably close to GA. Another quality piece of work from The Winchester, a true WA champ. Keep it up.Twenty Years 09:26, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]