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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know what this article lack and weather there copy edit is neede

Thanks,

Comments after a quick skim:

The lede could be expanded to cover more aspects of the article
The article suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION, with many sections only one paragraph long. Try to merge these together or expand upon them.
Merge citations that are the same, like citations 30-35. Help:Footnotes has information about this, or look at some other articles and copy their code.
Suggest archiving your websites using the IABot. The link to do that is here.
Many of the accolades might not be notable because they do not have their own wiki-articles. Wikipedia is not for promotion and not a database so if the award is not notable, it should not be in the article.
A copy-edit is definitely needed, especially with punctuation. The Guild of Copyeditors might help with this.
Are you connected to this organisation? If so, please read WP:COIE (and if you are paid by the organisation, please also read WP:PAID) and if you have any questions, please ping me.

That's all I have for now. Z1720 (talk) 22:06, 8 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]