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I've listed this article for peer review because it's undergone significant editing and I was interested in a second opinion of what the article needs before it can be eligible for Good Article Status.

Thanks, The lorax (talk) 00:14, 19 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You have too many quotes in your article, try to incorporate them into the text.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The Lead is too short, you need at least one more paragraph. see Wikipedia:LEAD--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Julia_Butterfly_Hill#Hill_in_popular_culture In music should be prose and not a list. You have to reference those facts. see Wikipedia:Cite--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Don't bold "Butterfly Hill, Julia" in the references.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Add ALT text to the second image.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]