Wikipedia:Peer review/John Baldwin (educator)/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because, quite simply, I want to make this an FA. However, since I haven't gottan an article this far, I'd like to see what parts need expanding, improving, copyediting, and the like. Basically whatever's needed to make this guy an FA.

Thanks, Wizardman 19:11, 9 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]


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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DTGardner 20:57, 10 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]