Wikipedia:Peer review/James Robert Baker/archive1

James Robert Baker edit

I have spent about 3 weeks writing and editing this article, both offline and on, and can't think of anything else I can do to improve it.

Please let me know if it is sourced enough, and whether you think it needs to be expanded or clarified. I had considered discussing each of his novels (their plots, themes and critical reaction), but though perhaps that was overkill. I have the information, though, if you think the article needs to be expanded.Jeffpw 19:40, 22 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 21:11, 22 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for that list of automated suggestions, Andy. I have implemented the ones that are relevent. It did tell me that the article was too short (I think it's 7kb of text), and asked if I could expand it. As I said earlier, I can also discuss his books one by one, but wondered if that was overkill (my feeling is that it probably is). It just seems rather pedantic to do that for an author who is not widely known, no matter how great his reputation is to those who have read him.

It also mentioned that I have no table of contents. Is that mandatory? To put in a table of contents, I would have to subdivide the text, and that would necessitate a substantial rewrite. I don't mind doing that, if necessary. I just don't want to go to that bother if the article in its present form is considered satisfactoryJeffpw 08:39, 23 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Well, it has now achieved GA status! Yippee! Can somebody have a look and suggest ways I can further improve it? I would really like to work on it and try for FA status. Thanks in advance. Jeffpw 20:22, 29 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]