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I've listed this article for peer review because it is one of my first full articles.

Thanks, $The Haz talk$ 21:43, 9 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

As a biography, this article is still much lacking on the subject's personal life. Who was he, other than a medical specialist? Even the coverage of his achievements seem a bit skimpy and lacking in "oomph" so as to speak. What makes http://wc.rootsweb.ancestry.com/cgi-bin/igm.cgi?op=GET&db=maris&id=I207293 a reliable source? With 3640 hits on Google Books, http://www.google.com/search?q=%22isaac+starr%22+cardio&btnG=Search+Books&tbm=bks&tbo=1, there are more and better sources than what are used (a paper published in Eldercare Technology for Clinical Practitioners stated he was commonly known as the "father of BCG"). Take a look there for material to further flesh out this article. Jappalang (talk) 12:12, 23 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!

The Haz talk

15:56, 23 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]