Housecleaning edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because…I think it's good and hope others think so too. I worked on it over a year. I think my wording is not a how-to. I hope you think so too. If other editors read it, they might want to work on it and make it longer. I plan on adding a picture or two.
Thanks, Chuck (talk) 08:02, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
- This article is undersourced. One citation per section is not sufficient. I would recommend that "litter problem", "clutter problem", "dustiness", and "dirtiness" become subsections of the "reasons" section, and that the training section be significantly expanded. This article should also have a section discussing how housecleaning varies throughout the world with subsections about different areas. A history section would also be very helpful. I also agree with the merge proposal; house work, household management, and housecleaning usually refer to the same concept, and "housekeeping" is the most common term for that concept. Neelix (talk) 18:28, 16 January 2009 (UTC)