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I've listed this article for peer review because… I request information on how I can expand this article. I have submitted article for a peer review previously, however I believe it was not enough. Thanks --Hpfan9374 (talk) 06:39, 12 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You need the following sections

Background - the conception of the album/how it came about/ any collaborations
Recording - when/where/producers/any difficulties etc
Reception - What did the critics say/quotes/ style etc
Information on promoting the album such as tours. M3tal H3ad (talk) 03:22, 13 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I'll get to work on that soon. Hpfan9374 (talk) 06:02, 13 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I would add that these same criteria apply for all the Harry and the Potters albums you have listed here - the main problem seems to be a lack of independent, reliable sources. WOuld it make sense to combine them into one main article (they are all pretty short now)? Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 20:12, 19 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I am not sure. I would strongly appreciate an example of this type of article, but I may be somewhat supportive of this, only if I like the outcome. Hpfan9374 (talk) 08:35, 21 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have to admit I do not write music articles and do not know of an example - have you asked at WikiProject Music? Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 15:19, 23 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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