Wikipedia:Peer review/H. H. Asquith/archive1

H. H. Asquith edit

I've listed this article for peer review because… we intend to take it to FAC. On behalf of self, KJP1, and Tim riley.

Thanks, Wehwalt (talk) 01:18, 23 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Keith D
  • The short references without dates are confusing where there are more than one entry for a specified name, such as Grigg, which has dated entries and non-dated entries. Keith D (talk) 21:28, 23 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I have amended the first Grigg to Grigg 1985, which I hope removes the confusion. I think the other doubles, Margot Asquith, Martin Gilbert and HHA himself, have dated entries throughout. We are grateful for the pick-up. KJP1 (talk) 13:52, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]