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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make it a Featured Article. It is already a GA and I would like to know if it passes the Wikipedia:Featured article criteria. And if not, I would like to know how to improve it. Thanks. Cheers. LYKANTROP 13:33, 4 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Laser brain's comments

You have a great start here, but I wouldn't consider this anywhere near comprehensive enough for FA status. Take a look at some other FAs on musical groups, like Powderfinger or Red Hot Chili Peppers to get an idea of the depth required. More research and more writing is needed.
The lead is far too short, but I suspect it will grow as the article grows.
The prose is pretty good as it stands; just need to expand it. :) --Laser brain (talk) 16:40, 6 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]