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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like someone with a fresh eye to take a look over the article and point out areas for improvement. I'd like to eventually take this to GA but I know I'm not the greatest content writer.

Thanks, Cabe 6403 ^{(Talk•Sign)} 17:08, 11 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Some things to look as you develop the article further:

The history section could use more of a narrative rather than list of facts.
Additional citations should be found for those uncited bits, like the last paragraph in the History section (about the proposed housing development), the Geography section, and much of the Culture and Sports section.
Check out some of the local history books, [1] maclean (talk) 18:22, 11 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]