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I've listed this article for peer review because that's what you do

Thanks, TheWarOfArt (talk) 19:54, 19 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Doing... I'll take the privilege of reviewing this article.

Here's what I found so far:

Lead could use some expansion.
An infobox containing info and a picture of the person in question could help (if not, then picture will do).
Is there a birthdate for the person?
Any mention of his previous life before his time in prison and with politics?
Add the date you put the references in the article.
Who wrote the articles you have links for?

What I've found so far is good and is somewhere close to start-class quality if the changes are made. Keep up the work. DepressedPer (talk) 07:32, 28 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]