Wikipedia:Peer review/Fenix*TX/archive1

Fenix*TX edit

I have been doing a lot of work on the article about the band Fenix*TX and I was wondering what improvements are to be made for it to become a featured article. --HarryCane 13:48, 2 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It looks pretty good. I just had a couple of minor issues:

Could you include some clarification of the expression "gleeful lyrics"?
Please clarify the minor ambiguity in the following sentence: "the album featured ten more raucous and energetic songs than on their previous efforts". Were there a total of ten songs, all of which were more raucous? Or were just ten out of all the songs more raucous?

Finally, since the band members don't have their own pages, could you include some background on the key members? Perhaps in a members section after the history. Thanks. — RJH 00:41, 12 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I cleared up both things and added a new music style section with samples. --HarryCane 15:19, 14 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]