Wikipedia:Peer review/Female genital mutilation/archive1

Female genital mutilation edit

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I'm considering submitting this article for FAC, so any feedback would be extremely helpful. Many thanks, SlimVirgin (talk) 18:11, 25 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Just noting here that I'm going to archive this and re-open it later. I've temporarily lost JSTOR access, and although I'd hoped to be able to get through a review without it, I'm finding already, in the course of text-source checks, that I can't. SlimVirgin (talk) 20:11, 26 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]